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Title: With A Clouded View: Various Interludes
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia
Pairing(s): Lucy/Susan
Rating: PG for this part, NC-17 overall.
Summary: Just a few little scenes, from various POVs
Word count: ~2000
Warnings: None

A/N: Chapter 1 and initial notes are here, and Chapter 2 is here. Other parts can be found on the "fic: with a clouded view" tag.

These originally formed a bridge in part 9 between Lucy's return from the forest and her meeting with Susan and the centaurs on Christmas eve. They were intended as a revisiting of some of the other characters I'd grown fond of but in the end they completely unbalanced the chapter so I had to remove them. I still kind of like them though and didn't want to delete them entirely so I'm posting them as a kind of appendix :)

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9, and Epilogue

(For those of you who find white on black annoying, there are also copies at my Archive of Our Own page).



With a Clouded View - Interludes )
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Title: With A Clouded View (Part 9 of 9, and Epilogue)
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia
Pairing(s): Lucy/Susan
Rating: PG for this part, NC-17 overall.
Summary: In which there is, finally, a happily ever after.
Word count: ~7000
Warnings: Sibling (sister/sister) incest. Don't like? Don't read.

A/N: Chapter 1 and initial notes are here, and Chapter 2 is here. Other parts can be found on the "fic: with a clouded view" tag.

I recently found a document on my laptop entitled 'Untitled Narnia' dating from May 22 2010 that contained the first few paragraphs of this. Which is to say, from first words to final full stop, this story has taken me almost four years to write. It's the longest thing I've ever written and, while I can't really say that there was ever any doubt that I'd finish, I really didn't expect it to take this long. Regardless of how many people read it, I have to admit to being pretty proud of myself right now.
A lot happens in 4 years, and this particular 4 years has seen all sorts of ups and downs. This ridiculous little story has never been far from my mind, one way or another, however much I've failed at speedy or consistent writing. I'll miss it, but hey, now there's time for the next thing, so that's nice.

While this is written from Lucy's point of view, and while I've grown to love her more than I ever thought possible, I wrote it, in a very real sense, for Susan. I've never come to terms with Lewis's treatment of her, and this is my response. To say that Lewis wouldn't have approved is something of an understatement, but isn't that one of the joys of fan-fiction?

As always, I want to thank likecharity, for her betaing and general wonderfulness. Thank you! ♥♥♥


Dedication: And finally, this is for all the people I've ever met online, in one fandom or another, or just on the wild and woolly highways and byways of the internet. This is for the love, the friends and the friendships, however lasting or fleeting. This is for zagury, my first fandom friend who, I'm happy to say, I'm still in touch with, and smeetie, with whom I was so close for a short time at the end of 2009 and whom I still remember with fondness and sadness, 4 years after she vanished from the internet. And this is for perverbially, whom I miss more than I can say, and sushizuzoru too, and jules2112, despite the fact that we appear to have fallen out over a ridiculous political disagreement. And this is for Shan, and Sivi, and Morgan, and Graham, and Jack, and Anna, and Flis, and Helen, and all the guys from the heady, if slightly stressful days, of Skins. And for lash_larue and lokifan too, and all you others I met through Harry Potter :)
And this is for Jules, and Kati, and Hannii, and most especially, Briella <3

And yes, I'm going a bit over the top, but did I mention 4 years? I hope it's not that surprising that I'm a little bit emotional XD

Anyway, rambling over. If you're reading this on LJ, feel free to check out the last chapter, and if you're reading on AO3, it's possible that you've already read it. I hope you enjoyed. <3

Disclaimer: Obviously all the characters and pretty much everything else belong to the estate of C.S. Lewis, and Walden Media. This is just for fun!

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Appendix (Various Interludes)

(For those of you who find white on black annoying, there are also copies at my Archive of Our Own page).


With a Clouded View, Part 9 and Epilogue )
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Title: With A Clouded View (Part 8 of 9)
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia
Pairing(s): Lucy/Susan
Rating: NC-17
Summary: In which there is a culmination and our heroine's life becomes immeasurably more complicated.
Word count: ~6200
Warnings: Sibling (sister/sister) incest. Don't like? Don't read.

A/N: Chapter 1 and initial notes are here, and Chapter 2 is here. Other parts can be found on the "fic: with a clouded view" tag.

I started this part some time round the end of February last year. What with one thing and another, including a major confidence fail and an extensive rewrite, it took something like 8 months to write. I've been holding off on posting till the story was finally finished, so I don't leave it another year to post the next part. Part 9 and the epilogue are now finished and betad. Part 9 needed a bit of tinkering so it's just being re-betad, but it's all over bar the shouting.
So close.
There'll be final comments when I post the last bits, which hopefully won't be long now. Yay :D


Endless thanks, once again, to likecharity, for betaing, encouragement, and being a wonderful person and an amazing friend. Thank you! ♥♥♥


Dedication: It seems a little wrong to dedicate this particular part to anyone in particular (what with the explicit sexytimes and all) so I'll dedicate it to all of you, and especially to all my friends: the ones I know in person and the ones I haven't had the pleasure of meeting IRL just yet. You're all wonderful, and I'm incredibly lucky to have you <3

Disclaimer: Obviously all the characters and pretty much everything else belong to the estate of C.S. Lewis, and Walden Media. This is just for fun!

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 9, and Epilogue
Appendix (Various Interludes)

(For those of you who find white on black annoying, there are also copies at my Archive of Our Own page).



With a Clouded View, Part 8 )
prunesquallormd: (Effy - Lost in thought)
As usual I seem to have just about struggled to the end of the week and now I just want to sleep all weekend. Not going to happen, of course. I never do sleep much, but at least I have no overnights and no Sams shift tomorrow and exactly no plans for the weekend so I get a lazy couple of days. Yay :)

The usual ramble )
prunesquallormd: (Effy - Lost in thought)
Title: With A Clouded View (Part 7 of 9)
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia
Pairing(s): Lucy/Susan
Rating: PG for this part. NC-17 overall
Summary: In which our heroine has an altercation and discovers that she has a lot to learn on the subject of diplomacy.
Word count: ~4800
Warnings: Incest, although only implied so far. Don't like? Don't read.
Also, the briefest of moments of suicidal thoughts, but you could blink and miss them, I'm glad to say :)

A/N: Chapter 1 and initial notes are here, and Chapter 2 is here. Other parts can be found on the "fic: with a clouded view" tag.

And still I fail at writing, apparently!
This part took about two months, and this is the first part I've posted since the end of June!
I'd say that I'd like to finish this by the summer at the latest, but then I really wanted to finish it by 2013, and well, as 2013 starts in 3 hours and 26 minutes (though not by my laptop. My laptop has gained time ever since I managed to pour half a cup of tea into it. Whoops! But it's a miracle that it still works at all and isn't just a very expensive piece of wire, metal and plastic so I should be grateful for that, I guess!) that seems rather unlikely! But hey, I have the rest planned out quite closely now and at the most it's going to be 2 more parts and an epilogue so, erm, done by next Christmas? Let's call it that, shall we, and then I can feel all pleased with myself if I get it finished before.
I fear that I'm trying the patience of even the most tolerant reader at this point (and not just with my rambling) but this long ago turned into an exercise in shear determination to finish what I started so all I can do is apologise for that, I'm afraid :)
But even after so long, I'm still loving the characters and I'm enjoying writing them, and that's the whole point of writing as a hobby, so :)

I'll stop waffling now!

As always, I'd like to thank likecharity, for her betaing and encouragement. You're fabulous! Thank you ♥♥♥


Dedication: For anyone who reads this far (and I don't actually expect many (or any) people on my f-list to actually read the story :D) I want to dedicate this to all of you, in hopes that you have a wonderful New Year and a fabulous 2013 full of happiness, joy and love ♥♥♥

Disclaimer: Obviously all the characters and pretty much everything else belong to the estate of C.S. Lewis, and Walden Media. This is just for fun!

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 8
Part 9, and Epilogue
Appendix (Various Interludes)

(For those of you who find white on black annoying, there are also copies at my Archive of Our Own page).


With a Clouded View, Part 7 )
prunesquallormd: (Default)
Title: With A Clouded View (Part 6 of 9)
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia
Pairing(s): Lucy/Susan
Rating: PG for this part. NC-17 overall
Summary: In which there is a morning after, and Lucy is paranoid and irritable.
Word count: ~3800
Warnings: Incest, although only implied so far. Don't like? Don't read.
A/N: Chapter 1 and initial notes are here, and Chapter 2 is here. Other parts can be found on the "fic: with a clouded view" tag.

Oh god, the total extent of my writing fail this year has to be experienced to be believed. less than 4000 words here and it's taken me months, one way or another. It's just lucky I have no ambitions to write for an actual living, I guess!
At the start of the year I'd rather hoped that I could finish this before 2013, but now that's seeming rather unlikely. Oh well, we shall see. Perhaps I'll overcome my writer's block and complete failure of motivation some time soon. I'm not holding my breath though!

Once again, huge thanks to likecharity, who took time out of her currently raging 1Direction obsession to beta for me. When something's dragged on for quite this long it's tricky to find willing betas so thank you loads, you're a star! ♥♥♥

Two years in the writing now, and 25000 words. I'll finish this if it kills me XD

Dedication: And this part's for Kati, who knows why :) ♥♥♥

Disclaimer: Obviously all the characters and pretty much everything else belong to the estate of C.S. Lewis, and Walden Media. This is just for fun!

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9, and Epilogue
Appendix (Various Interludes)

(For those of you who find white on black annoying, there are also copies at my Archive of Our Own page).


With a Clouded View, Part 6 )
prunesquallormd: (Effy - Lost in thought)
Title: With A Clouded View (Part 5 of 9)
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia
Pairing(s): Lucy/Susan
Rating: PG for this part. NC-17 overall
Summary: In which our heroine finally gets her wish, and it is not quite as she imagined. Also, more ridiculous cross-dressing shenanigans. What? I just like cross-dressing, ok? Cross-dressing and incest. Yeah, you can judge me now
Word count: 4619
Warnings: Incest, although only implied so far. Don't like? Don't read.
A/N: Chapter 1 and initial notes are here, and Chapter 2 is here. Other parts can be found on the "fic: with a clouded view" tag.

I wrote most of this (all but the first few hundred words) in about 5 days at the beginning of November. Thus far, my most productive week, fiction-wise, ever. It's been stalled for lack of a beta since then, so once again I'd like to say massive thanks to likecharity, who helped out loads. Thank you! ♥♥♥

So far, this whole thing has been about 20 months in the writing. It's hit 20000 words as of this chapter and I'm still not sure how long - in words or time - it will be. I've never finished anything this long before, and even if no one at all reads it, I'm absolutely determined to finish this, for personal satisfaction as much as anything else. Wish me luck :)

Dedication: And because it's her birthday this month, I'm going to dedicate this to perverbially. If you see this, a very early Happy Birthday! Have fun :) ♥



Disclaimer: Obviously all the characters and pretty much everything else belong to the estate of C.S. Lewis, and Walden Media. This is just for fun!

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9, and Epilogue
Appendix (Various Interludes)

(For those of you who find white on black annoying, there are also copies at my Archive of Our Own page).

With a Clouded View, Part 5 )
prunesquallormd: (Effy - Lost in thought)
Title: With A Clouded View (Part 4 of 9)
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia
Pairing(s): Lucy/Susan
Rating: PG for this part. NC-17 overall
Summary: In which Lucy hatches a plan, and there is cross-dressing.
Word count: 3177
Warnings: Incest, although only implied so far. Don't like? Don't read.
A/N: Chapter 1 and initial notes are here, and Chapter 2 is here.

Erm yeah. Apparently I posted the last part of this on May 23 of last year. Fail! I guess it's lucky that I only write as a hobby XD.
I can't really imagine anyone is particularly interested in this any more, I'm mostly just writing for myself really. It's been written for a little while actually but for one reason or another it hasn't really been in a fit state to post. Plus, it was a complete bitch to get on paper and I wanted to have the next part ready to roll just in case this one seemed like complete filler!

Loads and loads of thanks to my beta, who this time round was likecharity, who stepped in at the last minute, despite not really enjoying beta-ing. Thank you so much ♥♥♥

Dedication: This is for jules2112, just because :) ♥

Disclaimer: Obviously all the characters and pretty much everything else belong to the estate of C.S. Lewis, and Walden Media. This is just for fun!

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9, and Epilogue
Appendix (Various Interludes)

(For those of you who find white on black annoying, there are also copies at my Archive of Our Own page).

With a Clouded View, Part 4 )
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Title: With A Clouded View (Part 3 of 9)
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia
Pairing(s): Lucy/Susan
Rating: PG for this part. NC-17 overall
Summary: In which Lucy receives a visit from an old friend and comes to a decision.
Word count: 4895
Warnings: Incest, although only implied so far. Don't like? Don't read.
A/N: Chapter 1 and initial notes are here, and Chapter 2 is here.

Well, this part only took a couple of months, so go me! I still found it ridiculously hard to write, though (turns out, dreams sequences? Not as easy as they look). Also, 13000 words and still no smoochies! Fail D:
The question of Narnian diet is still bothering me. How are they not all vegetarians? And even that would be a problem in a country where a significant proportion of the flora is sentient. Lewis made a distinction between Talking and dumb beasts, and considered it fine to eat the latter, so I've gone with that (not an opinion I share, but whatever).

As always, loads of thanks to my betas, who this time round were [livejournal.com profile] cobalt_siren and [livejournal.com profile] likecharity. You've both been super-helpful and encouraging. I really can't thank you enough ♥♥♥

Dedication: This part is for [livejournal.com profile] sushizuzoru, who's rather fond of Lucy/Aslan interaction. I hope you enjoy it, hon :D ♥
This is also dedicated to [livejournal.com profile] perverbially, because she's fabulous and deserves it! ♥

Disclaimer: Obviously all the characters and pretty much everything else belong to the estate of C.S. Lewis, and Walden Media. This is just for fun!

Part 1
Part 2
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9, and Epilogue
Appendix (Various Interludes)

(For those of you who find white on black annoying, there are also copies at my Archive of Our Own page).

With a Clouded View, Part 3 )
prunesquallormd: (Default)
Title: With A Clouded View (Part 2 of 9)
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia
Pairing(s): Lucy/Susan
Rating: PG for this part. NC-17 overall
Summary: In which Lucy is guilt-ridden and Edmund is infuriating.
Word count: 4123
Warnings: Incest, although only implied so far. Don't like? Don't read.
A/N: Chapter 1 and initial notes are here.

This has taken for ever, and given that I posted the first part almost exactly 8 months ago, I can't imagine that anyone but me's still interested. But hey, it's now the longest story - and the only multi-chapter one- I've ever written and I'm having fun with it, so.
By the way, can anyone tell me why beavers would eat bacon, or how it's possible for a country to continue to feed itself after a hundred years of winter? Just two of so many questions that have occurred to me in the months that this story has been going around my brain.

Thanks so much to my beta [livejournal.com profile] cobalt_siren. And thanks too, to [livejournal.com profile] perverbially, [livejournal.com profile] sushizuzoru and [livejournal.com profile] jules2112, who've been so supportive and just generally fabulous. ♥

Dedication: Once again, this is for [livejournal.com profile] likecharity, who does so much for Narnia fandom.

Disclaimer: Obviously all the characters and pretty much everything else belong to the estate of C.S. Lewis, and Walden Media. This is just for fun!

Part 1
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9, and Epilogue
Appendix (Various Interludes)

(For those of you who find white on black annoying, there are also copies at my Archive of Our Own page).

With a Clouded View, Part 2 )
prunesquallormd: (Keffy - &hearts;)
Title: Full beautiful, a faery's child
Fandom: Phoenix Wright, Ace Attorney
Pairing(s): Adrian Andrews/Franziska von Karma
Rating: NC-17
Summary: There are some lessons that Adrian Andrews must learn the hard way. She doesn't appear to be complaining ...
Word count: 2560
Warnings:Dom!Franziska/Sub!Adrian, spanking, masturbation, yada, yada, yada. This is filth, pure and simple, despite the fact that it's probably one of the least explicit things I've written in ages.
A/N: This is a little present for the super-lovely [livejournal.com profile] sushizuzoru who wanted, if I remember rightly, "well-written, shamelessly filthy smut". Well, I can't vouch for the well-written bit, but it's certainly filthy, and I seem to have lost the last vestiges of shame I had a while back.
I hope you enjoy it, sweetie :)

Oodles and oodles of thanks to my beta, [livejournal.com profile] perverbially. Most of what I know about these characters comes from her, and she's been incredibly helpful with all sorts of things. It's more true than usual to say that anything good or enjoyable about this is due to her. Obviously, anything that's dodgy or unenjoyable comes from me.
Thank you, hon. You're a star ♥

The title is from Keats's 'La Belle Dame Sans Merci' because, honestly, it's porn. How else am I going to make it classy?

Disclaimer: The characters belong to Capcom, and they probably wouldn't approve of what I've done to them, but hey, it's just for fun!

Adrian Andrews shivered, standing stock-still, her head cocked. There was silence now, but she could have sworn that there had been something. )
prunesquallormd: (Luna/Ginny-kiss)
Title: Of Pumpkins and Pictographs

Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing(s): Ginny/Luna/Pansy
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Pansy Parkinson's attempts at blackmail go catastrophically awry.
Word count: ~6700
Warnings: Hints at noncon, but they don't amount to anything.
Notes: This is possibly the filthiest thing I've ever written, so if you know me IRL, standard request applies: don't read, please, or if you must, don't tell me :).

Huge thanks to my fabulous beta, the very lovely [livejournal.com profile] flister.

This is a pressie for [livejournal.com profile] perverbially, whom I love to bits ♥

Disclaimer: Obviously all the characters and pretty much everything else belong to JK Rowling. This is just for fun!

Pansy Parkinson smirked as her eyes followed the pumpkin-headed figure from the Great Hall. The Halloween feast was in full swing, and since the moment Pansy had spotted that bitch Weasley making her excuses to Potter and his cronies and slipping away, she'd had her eyes fixed on her little girlfriend's ridiculous costume. )
prunesquallormd: (Ginny/Luna- our own sunlit days 2)
Hi!
God, so busy. And obviously today I managed to fritter away most of today being all knackered and needing recover from the rest of the week. Annoying! (Also annoying: a boiler that only works about 50% of the time, and so I have to boil water to wash the other 50%. Twice, I've had someone to look at it, but because the fault is intermittent, it's kind of hard to track down. If it carries on, he'll have to start replacing the expensive bits. Boo).

The Skins Big Bang seems to be a massive success, and I'm very much enjoying my beta-ing duties. I occasionally think I've bitten off a little more than I can chew, but hey, I like doing it, so (it's like: I have actual permission to be pedantic at people, and they can't complain. How good is that? :p ).
And talking of the Skins BB, our glorious leader (AKA [livejournal.com profile] shan_3414 :)) made this a few days ago, and god, it's so lovely. It makes all kinds of nostalgic. Just beautiful.
Click for pretty )
prunesquallormd: (Default)
Title: With A Clouded View (Part 1 of 9)
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia
Pairing(s): Lucy/Susan
Rating: R for this part. NC-17 overall
Summary: The loneliness comes like the blood, unheralded and without warning. She doesn't recognise the ache that overwhelms her. She knows only that she's lost something, and she couldn't even say what it is.
Word count: 4200
Warnings: Incest, although only implied in this part. Don't like? Don't read.
A/N: I have a few issues with C. S. Lewis (especially his treatment of Susan) and a fondness for fictional incest. This story reflects both those things.
Endless thanks to my betas: [livejournal.com profile] perverbially, without whose enthusiasm and support I'd never have had the courage to post this, and someone else, who'd rather remain nameless, but who will always remain awesome :) ♥

Dedication This is for [livejournal.com profile] likecharity, who's fab, and whose The Night Starts Here is one of my fave things ever :)

Disclaimer: Obviously all the characters and pretty much everything else belong to the estate of C.S. Lewis, and Walden Media. This is just for fun!

Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9, and Epilogue
Appendix (Various Interludes)

(For those of you who find white on black annoying, there are also copies at my Archive of Our Own page).

With a Clouded View, Part 1 )
prunesquallormd: (Luna/Ginny-kiss)
Title: A Piacere
(Part 3 of "Giving Up These Kisses")
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Ginny/Luna
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Ginny visits Luna in her place of work. Honestly, it's porn, what do you think happens?
Word count: 5000 words of rather fluffy, unashamedly romantic smut.
Warnings: None to speak of. A teeny bit of very, very light and entirely consensual bondage. Nothing other than that, really.
Disclaimer: Obviously all the characters and pretty much everything else belong to JK Rowling. This is just for fun!

Weeks and weeks ago, I promised [livejournal.com profile] perverbially a story as a belated birthday present. That story is currently stalled due to my total and utter fail at anything even remotely resembling plot. In its place she's been kind enough to accept this rather fluffy bit of smut as a sort of unbirthday present.
Sorry to make you wait so long, dude. I hope you enjoy it ♥


Author's Note 1: Betaing, moral support, and all sorts of useful input and suggestions were provided by the very lovely [livejournal.com profile] flister. I might have finished this earlier without her help, but also far less well, and I'd certainly be nowhere near as happy with it. So, thank her for the parts that work here, and blame me for the ones that don't.
Thanks Flis, you're a star ♥
AND OH MY GOD, I'VE JUST NOTICED IT'S YOUR BIRTHDAY! HAPPY BIRTHDAY SWEETIE <3<3<3. I hope it's a fab one :)

A/N 2: This is the third part of a loosely linked series of Ginny/Luna stories that I've finally decided to give an overall title, so it's now called "Giving Up These Kisses" (stolen from a song by Tori Amos, via a rather lovely mix that Sivi did for her Fate is Overgrown last June). The other parts can be found here and here

A/N 3: It's been pointed out to me that asking my real life friends not to read things that I post here just makes them curious as to what it is, which is reasonable enough. But really, it's just very fluffy, but also rather explicit, smut. I can't for the life of me understand why you'd want to read porn by someone you actually know, but if you must, please, never, ever tell me. Thanks :)

So anyway, I've rambled on more than enough. Without further ado:-

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A Piacere
And don't worry, Kingsley's not in it for long )

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