It is quite difficult in the beginning! Actually, I even struggle sometimes now, and I've written tons. XD It's what you said about it seeming mechanical, I think, it feels like that when you're writing it for sure and it's hard to imagine how it's coming across. But you did a fantastic job. :)

I hope you do write them again! Or more Skins fic in general.

You're welcome for the comment, of course. :D