Okay, you should write more. Srsly! You should. I loved the characterizations of both women here and felt that they were spot on. And yes, as well you know from reading my stuff, Ginny swears like a trooper. The Luna/Filtch gave me a pause, but I thought you pulled it out of the squick fire with great care and wonderful writing.
Really Sweetie, you should write more often. Well done!