Thanks, I'm really glad you liked it (like I said, everyone else I actually know in real life has remained noticeably silent :)).

I get a bit bored with my style, sometimes; it can feel a bit like wading through treacle to me. But then, it takes me so long to write anything that I can never really tell how it reads to anyone else.

It's horribly unfair on Luna, and I hate the downbeat ending but that's where it was going, so. I shall definitely be writing more at some point to rectify the situation though :)

I'm happy it worked for you. I love them together so much, so it's good that I managed to convey in some small way what I like about the pairing.