A bit painful to read, but in a good way mind. I love your Ginny, I see so much of my own version in her that it warms my heart, but she does come off completely as yours. Even though I'm not a huge Ginny/Luna shipper (Duh) you've really made me feel the emotions and dynamic going on between them here.
Really a very nice piece of work!
And well written fluff is better than badly written pron any day Luv!