I love it. I love how it's from Pansy's POV and I love how oblivious she is to her own desires at first, and the discovery throughout the story as it all starts to make sense. And how she becomes gradually less aggressive, too. I LOVE the electricity she has with Ginny, the way they're sniping at each other but at the end Ginny's so nice, and omg Luna is perfect in her dreamy matter-of-factness about the whole thing, just complimenting Pansy and being so adorable. ♥ All their personalities go together weirdly well!
I love that it's so filthy and sex-filled but there's still a story there, and the emotions play such an important part. And the sex is beautifully written, once again - Pansy's first orgasm, just gorgeous. And this might sound a little odd, but I love the emphasis you've put on non-penetrative sex here, that both Pansy and Luna come from grinding themselves against thighs. It seems like there's so much focus on penetration, in real life as well as porn, and so few women can actually orgasm that way. It's just kinda refreshing to read and I like the sort of innocent-discovery sense of it from Pansy's POV - that this is something she's never had with Draco. You write about female sexual pleasure incredibly well!! ;)
And ohh, such lovely mental images. I love Ginny/Luna and how there's such a strong sense of them being a couple even with everything that's going on. The handholding and cuddling and conferring with each other.
♥ ALSO the whole threesome thing, you'd never know it was your first time writing one. It flows perfectly. And I know how difficult it can be, especially when everybody uses the same pronouns! And finally, your tags for this entry are awesome, jsyk.
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I love it. I love how it's from Pansy's POV and I love how oblivious she is to her own desires at first, and the discovery throughout the story as it all starts to make sense. And how she becomes gradually less aggressive, too. I LOVE the electricity she has with Ginny, the way they're sniping at each other but at the end Ginny's so nice, and omg Luna is perfect in her dreamy matter-of-factness about the whole thing, just complimenting Pansy and being so adorable. ♥ All their personalities go together weirdly well!
I love that it's so filthy and sex-filled but there's still a story there, and the emotions play such an important part. And the sex is beautifully written, once again - Pansy's first orgasm, just gorgeous. And this might sound a little odd, but I love the emphasis you've put on non-penetrative sex here, that both Pansy and Luna come from grinding themselves against thighs. It seems like there's so much focus on penetration, in real life as well as porn, and so few women can actually orgasm that way. It's just kinda refreshing to read and I like the sort of innocent-discovery sense of it from Pansy's POV - that this is something she's never had with Draco. You write about female sexual pleasure incredibly well!! ;)
And ohh, such lovely mental images. I love Ginny/Luna and how there's such a strong sense of them being a couple even with everything that's going on. The handholding and cuddling and conferring with each other.
♥ ALSO the whole threesome thing, you'd never know it was your first time writing one. It flows perfectly. And I know how difficult it can be, especially when everybody uses the same pronouns! And finally, your tags for this entry are awesome, jsyk.