I can understand having a bit of trouble, again considering that you haven't played the game, but I thought their personalities shown through rather well. Franziska really is just generally very impatient and demanding, so it works well with her as dom, especially when Adrian isn't paying particular attention to what she's meant to be doing. :P She's a derp like that.
Pervy did a good fix-up, though, if there was excessive swearing, because I can't honestly see her swearing all that much. Maybe just once, if it really slips out, but it's more Franziska's thing. And her writing does pull you very close to the characters, which I love <333
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I can understand having a bit of trouble, again considering that you haven't played the game, but I thought their personalities shown through rather well. Franziska really is just generally very impatient and demanding, so it works well with her as dom, especially when Adrian isn't paying particular attention to what she's meant to be doing. :P She's a derp like that.
Pervy did a good fix-up, though, if there was excessive swearing, because I can't honestly see her swearing all that much. Maybe just once, if it really slips out, but it's more Franziska's thing. And her writing does pull you very close to the characters, which I love <333
PHONE SEX IS THE ANSWER TO ALL OF LIVES PROBLEMS, AS ARE THREESOMES