I love the way that you just transport me to Narnia with this fic. There're all the little mentions of the various creatures and peoples that just make it that much more vivid and real.
I love Lucy's internal thought process in this, and Edmund being just so Edmund-like, lol. Attempting to be helpful in the least helpful way ever.
Poor Lucy. I have a feeling that this party is not going to go well for her. She really should go and have a serious talk with Susan...;)
Anyway, I loved this, and can't wait for more (so get writing!!!)! <3
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I love the way that you just transport me to Narnia with this fic. There're all the little mentions of the various creatures and peoples that just make it that much more vivid and real.
I love Lucy's internal thought process in this, and Edmund being just so Edmund-like, lol. Attempting to be helpful in the least helpful way ever.
Poor Lucy. I have a feeling that this party is not going to go well for her. She really should go and have a serious talk with Susan...;)
Anyway, I loved this, and can't wait for more (so get writing!!!)!
<3