Oh, yay! I went to Liverpool for a few days and I was so happy to see this on my flist when I got back, and then all of my computer issues happened and I didn't get a chance to read it until now. I'm actually saving this comment in case I get another blue screen attack. XD
Anyway! It's been so long now that I had to go refresh my memory of the first part, and was reminded by how much I adored it—and it's amazing how well the second part flows on from it, too, considering the amount of time that's passed. I have problems with that sometimes with The Night Starts Here, so I'm impressed by the way you've stayed in the same mindset and the tone of the fic doesn't change.
I really do love the way you write about Narnia—it all just feels so real and the little details of other characters and creatures really help to embellish the story. I think my favourite part of this though, is Edmund. I can completely understand Lucy's frustration with him, but hahaha, he's so adorable, trying so hard to help and just completely fixating on his plan. I adored the scene with the two of them talking at the beginning, you portrayed such a sweet brother/sister relationship and it definitely felt like them to me.
My heart sank when I reached the end, ngl. I hope there will be a next part soon, I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes. As always, your writing is beautiful, and I just want to congratulate you for managing to continue this story over so much time, because I know how much of a challenge that is. ♥
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Anyway! It's been so long now that I had to go refresh my memory of the first part, and was reminded by how much I adored it—and it's amazing how well the second part flows on from it, too, considering the amount of time that's passed. I have problems with that sometimes with The Night Starts Here, so I'm impressed by the way you've stayed in the same mindset and the tone of the fic doesn't change.
I really do love the way you write about Narnia—it all just feels so real and the little details of other characters and creatures really help to embellish the story. I think my favourite part of this though, is Edmund. I can completely understand Lucy's frustration with him, but hahaha, he's so adorable, trying so hard to help and just completely fixating on his plan. I adored the scene with the two of them talking at the beginning, you portrayed such a sweet brother/sister relationship and it definitely felt like them to me.
My heart sank when I reached the end, ngl. I hope there will be a next part soon, I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes. As always, your writing is beautiful, and I just want to congratulate you for managing to continue this story over so much time, because I know how much of a challenge that is. ♥