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prunesquallormd) wrote2010-03-01 08:40 pm
prunesquallormd) wrote2010-03-01 08:40 pm
An excerpt - "Things that Luna Lovegood excels at"
Title: "Things that Luna Lovegood excels at, Number 1: Ginny Weasley"
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing(s): Ginny/Luna
Rating: NC-17
Summary: There are some things that Luna just knows
Word count: 367
Warnings: PWP
This is the opening scene of my very belated birthday present to![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
perverbially. The full story will probably take a while and will have, like, plot and stuff. Also, it won't just be porn.
In that sense, it's almost the polar opposite of this, which 1) didn't take very long at all, 2) has no plot, 3) is just porn.
But I thought I'd post it as a teaser anyway, because hey, it's not like it's going to spoiler the story is it? The title will change, I'm just not sure to what yet.
I hope you enjoy :)
(Also, this is the first time I've ever used second person. It's an acquired taste and I may not keep with it. We'll see).
Note: As per my last effort, I'd rather anyone who knows me IRL didn't read this. And if you do, just pretend you haven't, 'k?
Disclaimer: Obviously I don't own Harry Potter. If only ...
You'll never tire of this. The way Ginny melts under you hands. The soft, supple warmth of her skin. The taste and smell of her. The noises she makes: the sighs, the moans; her screams, entreaties and demands. You've never seen anyone or anything more beautiful, and you're sure you never will.
She breaks under your tongue, clenching around your fingers as they move in a ceaseless rhythm, in and out, twisting and curling; grasping at your hair as if it's the only thing that will keep her from one final endless fall. You hear your name, but the rest is a gasping, stuttering sigh.
The shudders and gasps finally subside and you lay still for a moment, your head cushioned on Ginny's thigh. Then, with a final playful lick on her clit (and she barely has the energy to react at all now, although her breath hitches a little) you crawl your way back up her body, trailing licks and kisses as you go. She gets impatient as you linger to plant plentiful kisses on her breasts, and gives your hair a gentle tug.
“Get up here and kiss me, will you?” she demands, still breathless.
You allow her to pull your mouth to hers and kiss herself off your lips, greedily at first before slowing, little satisfied moans sounding in her throat.
She breaks the kiss after a few moments, pushing at your shoulders a little. She lays there - achingly beautiful, sated, happy – staring up at you. You're sure your face is still shiny with her, and the thought fills you with something that's equal parts contentment, smugness, and desire.
“Jesus, Luna. How are you so fucking good at that? Are you sure you haven't been practicing?” Ginny asks, sounding half serious.
You smirk a little then, raising your hand to her lips, letting her lick your fingers clean, one by one. Another thing that you'll never tire of.
“You always did say I have an overactive imagination. What do you think I'm imagining when we're apart? And anyway, silly,” you laugh, kissing the tip of her nose softly, “you're the only practice I need. ”
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing(s): Ginny/Luna
Rating: NC-17
Summary: There are some things that Luna just knows
Word count: 367
Warnings: PWP
This is the opening scene of my very belated birthday present to
perverbially. The full story will probably take a while and will have, like, plot and stuff. Also, it won't just be porn.In that sense, it's almost the polar opposite of this, which 1) didn't take very long at all, 2) has no plot, 3) is just porn.
But I thought I'd post it as a teaser anyway, because hey, it's not like it's going to spoiler the story is it? The title will change, I'm just not sure to what yet.
I hope you enjoy :)
(Also, this is the first time I've ever used second person. It's an acquired taste and I may not keep with it. We'll see).
Note: As per my last effort, I'd rather anyone who knows me IRL didn't read this. And if you do, just pretend you haven't, 'k?
Disclaimer: Obviously I don't own Harry Potter. If only ...
You'll never tire of this. The way Ginny melts under you hands. The soft, supple warmth of her skin. The taste and smell of her. The noises she makes: the sighs, the moans; her screams, entreaties and demands. You've never seen anyone or anything more beautiful, and you're sure you never will.
She breaks under your tongue, clenching around your fingers as they move in a ceaseless rhythm, in and out, twisting and curling; grasping at your hair as if it's the only thing that will keep her from one final endless fall. You hear your name, but the rest is a gasping, stuttering sigh.
The shudders and gasps finally subside and you lay still for a moment, your head cushioned on Ginny's thigh. Then, with a final playful lick on her clit (and she barely has the energy to react at all now, although her breath hitches a little) you crawl your way back up her body, trailing licks and kisses as you go. She gets impatient as you linger to plant plentiful kisses on her breasts, and gives your hair a gentle tug.
“Get up here and kiss me, will you?” she demands, still breathless.
You allow her to pull your mouth to hers and kiss herself off your lips, greedily at first before slowing, little satisfied moans sounding in her throat.
She breaks the kiss after a few moments, pushing at your shoulders a little. She lays there - achingly beautiful, sated, happy – staring up at you. You're sure your face is still shiny with her, and the thought fills you with something that's equal parts contentment, smugness, and desire.
“Jesus, Luna. How are you so fucking good at that? Are you sure you haven't been practicing?” Ginny asks, sounding half serious.
You smirk a little then, raising your hand to her lips, letting her lick your fingers clean, one by one. Another thing that you'll never tire of.
“You always did say I have an overactive imagination. What do you think I'm imagining when we're apart? And anyway, silly,” you laugh, kissing the tip of her nose softly, “you're the only practice I need. ”
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*FLAILS*
PLOT IS SO OVERRATED, BB ♥ ♥ ♥ Oh my, Luna resting her head against Ginny's thigh... socuteIcoulddie! ♥
*FLAILS SOME MORE OMG*
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*Pats* :D
There's an LJ group whose name I've completely forgotten that's basically just entry after entry of really crap superpowers. Yours would fit :D
(Will definitely give you my thoughts on Effy's episode soon, by the way. Not tonight though. Bedtime for me :) )
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I'm so happy you liked it :)
I was a bit nervous posting this. I love these girls so much and I really wanted to do them justice. I wanted it to be sweet and cute and loving, but still hot.
I don't know. From your reaction, I may have hit what I was looking for ;)
♥
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You silly darling, it is all of these things. I feel so lucky to get such a lovely gift *_*
*glows like a giddy thing*
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I tried so hard to show the depth of the love I imagine these girls having for one another. I love them so much I'd hate to think this was just smut for its own sake (although obviously I hope it works as smut too). The fact that you felt there's a genuine relationship there (even in so few words) means a lot to me ♥
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Lovely women, lovingly written!
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The whole thought of writing something with actual plot (as opposed to my usual bits of plotless, slightly smutty fluff) is making me more than a little nervous, but hopefully I'll be equal to the challenge :)
I'm so pleased this caught your imagination so well, and that 'lovingly' pretty much makes my day. If there's one feeling I was going for, it was there. If I make clear how much I love them, and how much I think they love each other, then I'm very happy :)
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I'm really glad you like it :)
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Hot was pretty much what I was going for, so I'm glad it worked ;)
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(Anonymous) 2010-03-24 01:25 am (UTC)(link)no subject
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I'm so glad you liked it ♥
I'm rather struggling with the continuation of this. Oh how I suck at plot. Ho hum.