Title: With A Clouded View (Part 7 of 9)
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia
Pairing(s): Lucy/Susan
Rating: PG for this part. NC-17 overall
Summary: In which our heroine has an altercation and discovers that she has a lot to learn on the subject of diplomacy.
Word count: ~4800
Warnings: Incest, although only implied so far. Don't like? Don't read.
Also, the briefest of moments of suicidal thoughts, but you could blink and miss them, I'm glad to say :)
A/N: Chapter 1 and initial notes are here, and Chapter 2 is here. Other parts can be found on the "fic: with a clouded view" tag.
And still I fail at writing, apparently!
This part took about two months, and this is the first part I've posted since the end of June!
I'd say that I'd like to finish this by the summer at the latest, but then I really wanted to finish it by 2013, and well, as 2013 starts in 3 hours and 26 minutes (though not by my laptop. My laptop has gained time ever since I managed to pour half a cup of tea into it. Whoops! But it's a miracle that it still works at all and isn't just a very expensive piece of wire, metal and plastic so I should be grateful for that, I guess!) that seems rather unlikely! But hey, I have the rest planned out quite closely now and at the most it's going to be 2 more parts and an epilogue so, erm, done by next Christmas? Let's call it that, shall we, and then I can feel all pleased with myself if I get it finished before.
I fear that I'm trying the patience of even the most tolerant reader at this point (and not just with my rambling) but this long ago turned into an exercise in shear determination to finish what I started so all I can do is apologise for that, I'm afraid :)
But even after so long, I'm still loving the characters and I'm enjoying writing them, and that's the whole point of writing as a hobby, so :)
I'll stop waffling now!
As always, I'd like to thank likecharity, for her betaing and encouragement. You're fabulous! Thank you ♥♥♥
Dedication: For anyone who reads this far (and I don't actually expect many (or any) people on my f-list to actually read the story :D) I want to dedicate this to all of you, in hopes that you have a wonderful New Year and a fabulous 2013 full of happiness, joy and love ♥♥♥
Disclaimer: Obviously all the characters and pretty much everything else belong to the estate of C.S. Lewis, and Walden Media. This is just for fun!
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 8
Part 9, and Epilogue
Appendix (Various Interludes)
(For those of you who find white on black annoying, there are also copies at my Archive of Our Own page).
( With a Clouded View, Part 7 )
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia
Pairing(s): Lucy/Susan
Rating: PG for this part. NC-17 overall
Summary: In which our heroine has an altercation and discovers that she has a lot to learn on the subject of diplomacy.
Word count: ~4800
Warnings: Incest, although only implied so far. Don't like? Don't read.
Also, the briefest of moments of suicidal thoughts, but you could blink and miss them, I'm glad to say :)
A/N: Chapter 1 and initial notes are here, and Chapter 2 is here. Other parts can be found on the "fic: with a clouded view" tag.
And still I fail at writing, apparently!
This part took about two months, and this is the first part I've posted since the end of June!
I'd say that I'd like to finish this by the summer at the latest, but then I really wanted to finish it by 2013, and well, as 2013 starts in 3 hours and 26 minutes (though not by my laptop. My laptop has gained time ever since I managed to pour half a cup of tea into it. Whoops! But it's a miracle that it still works at all and isn't just a very expensive piece of wire, metal and plastic so I should be grateful for that, I guess!) that seems rather unlikely! But hey, I have the rest planned out quite closely now and at the most it's going to be 2 more parts and an epilogue so, erm, done by next Christmas? Let's call it that, shall we, and then I can feel all pleased with myself if I get it finished before.
I fear that I'm trying the patience of even the most tolerant reader at this point (and not just with my rambling) but this long ago turned into an exercise in shear determination to finish what I started so all I can do is apologise for that, I'm afraid :)
But even after so long, I'm still loving the characters and I'm enjoying writing them, and that's the whole point of writing as a hobby, so :)
I'll stop waffling now!
As always, I'd like to thank likecharity, for her betaing and encouragement. You're fabulous! Thank you ♥♥♥
Dedication: For anyone who reads this far (and I don't actually expect many (or any) people on my f-list to actually read the story :D) I want to dedicate this to all of you, in hopes that you have a wonderful New Year and a fabulous 2013 full of happiness, joy and love ♥♥♥
Disclaimer: Obviously all the characters and pretty much everything else belong to the estate of C.S. Lewis, and Walden Media. This is just for fun!
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 8
Part 9, and Epilogue
Appendix (Various Interludes)
(For those of you who find white on black annoying, there are also copies at my Archive of Our Own page).
( With a Clouded View, Part 7 )