Oh my god. You had me at hello with this! From the first line, you created such an intense atmosphere, it was so visually stimulating. The hairs on the back of my neck honestly stood up from the line She likes the forest, and besides, she's not afraid of anything - and Ginny can never tell if it's something missing in her (like colour blindness maybe), or whether her view of the world is so other that there really is nothing to fear until the end of this piece. You truly really captured Ginny's character well. I feel you gave her a third dimension she often lacks in fanfiction, and dare I say it, in the canon material as well. I am also seriously jealous of the way you wrote the kiss between the two girls. It was a beautiful image, soft and loving, but awfully sensual too. Really, fuck that. oh I too imagine Ginny as having the mouth of a sailor and this line put a grin on my face :) Unfortunately, my smile, and my spirits fell somewhat when I read the ending but it was beautiful nonetheless. You can't believe how much I look forward to reading more from you!
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Date: 2009-09-27 02:47 am (UTC)From the first line, you created such an intense atmosphere, it was so visually stimulating. The hairs on the back of my neck honestly stood up from the line She likes the forest, and besides, she's not afraid of anything - and Ginny can never tell if it's something missing in her (like colour blindness maybe), or whether her view of the world is so other that there really is nothing to fear until the end of this piece.
You truly really captured Ginny's character well. I feel you gave her a third dimension she often lacks in fanfiction, and dare I say it, in the canon material as well.
I am also seriously jealous of the way you wrote the kiss between the two girls. It was a beautiful image, soft and loving, but awfully sensual too.
Really, fuck that. oh I too imagine Ginny as having the mouth of a sailor and this line put a grin on my face :)
Unfortunately, my smile, and my spirits fell somewhat when I read the ending but it was beautiful nonetheless.
You can't believe how much I look forward to reading more from you!