I'm so happy you enjoyed it. It took me so long and I was really struggling with making the characterisation work (or even just showing personalities at all) through the porn :D. I usually prefer to be able to show at least a solid emotional grounding to the smut, but that didn't really happen here. Still, as long as it's entertaining and hot, I'm happy :p.
I'm entirely indebted to Pervy for all of the places the characterisation worked (especially Adrian's dialogue, which was a lot more sweary and demanding before I made the changes she suggested). She writes Franzy and Adrian so beautifully that I feel like I know them, even though I've not played the games.
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branchandroot
Re: Pffft you ♥
Date: 2011-02-04 12:22 pm (UTC)I'm so happy you enjoyed it. It took me so long and I was really struggling with making the characterisation work (or even just showing personalities at all) through the porn :D. I usually prefer to be able to show at least a solid emotional grounding to the smut, but that didn't really happen here. Still, as long as it's entertaining and hot, I'm happy :p.
I'm entirely indebted to Pervy for all of the places the characterisation worked (especially Adrian's dialogue, which was a lot more sweary and demanding before I made the changes she suggested). She writes Franzy and Adrian so beautifully that I feel like I know them, even though I've not played the games.
YAY PHONE SEX :P
:D :D :D