Aaw, thanks Liz, I'm so glad you enjoyed it <3 Not gonna lie, this chapter was ridiculously hard to write and it's not really getting any easier (writer's block is biting really hard right now :(). I'm happy you liked the Lucy/Susan bit at the end. I really felt like it was time to actually show them together, and to show Susan as Lucy sees her (which is obviously as being kind of bossy and irritating, but with all this other stuff just bubbling away under the surface. Confusing! :D).
Keeping Lucy consistent (my characterisations differ from Lewis's, I think, and intentionally so, but I do try to keep them internally consistent!) is key, so it's good to hear that that's working for you <3
♥♥♥ I've written about 200 words since I finished this chapter over a month ago. Gah. Fail! So I'm afraid it may be a little while till the next chapter's finished. Hopefully it won't be too long though, and I really hope it's worth the wait :D
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Date: 2011-06-01 07:09 pm (UTC)Not gonna lie, this chapter was ridiculously hard to write and it's not really getting any easier (writer's block is biting really hard right now :(). I'm happy you liked the Lucy/Susan bit at the end. I really felt like it was time to actually show them together, and to show Susan as Lucy sees her (which is obviously as being kind of bossy and irritating, but with all this other stuff just bubbling away under the surface. Confusing! :D).
Keeping Lucy consistent (my characterisations differ from Lewis's, I think, and intentionally so, but I do try to keep them internally consistent!) is key, so it's good to hear that that's working for you <3
♥♥♥
I've written about 200 words since I finished this chapter over a month ago. Gah. Fail! So I'm afraid it may be a little while till the next chapter's finished. Hopefully it won't be too long though, and I really hope it's worth the wait :D
<3