That was really great, and really sad. I feel for Sophia, even if we didn't get a lot of time to get to know her character, and comparing her with Effy made me feel even worse, but in a good way, if that makes sense. Anyway, that was very well-written, you have no reason to be embarrassed about the technical aspects, even if you don't want people you know to know about the sex part, lol. :)
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Date: 2010-02-20 12:38 am (UTC)